So many breezes
wander through my summer room:
but never enough
Issa
hibiscus flowers
munched up in the horse’s mouth
eaten one by one
Basso
Boneless, translucent,
We undulate, undulate,
Gelatinously.
Jack Prelutsky
What do you notice about Haiku? I notice how the poet expresses his feelings about something in nature; how he creates a visual image from a natural scene, usually through personification; I notice the precision of word choice and the succinct language–the Japanese refer to this as “wa” or harmony; I believe that the Japanese poets of long ago frowned on verbosity or wordiness; I see who or what, I see what they are doing, where it is happening, and how or why it is happening.
Whitney said,
February 20, 2008 at 12:25 am
I really like Haiku poetry. I think it gives someone a unique chance to express an idea, thought, or feeling in a few meaningful words. Haiku is also a very beautiful form. I for one really enjoy nature poetry and Haiku really appeals to me. I also wanted to let you know, on another subject, that I tried that link you gave me. If you get a chance, will you let me know if it works? Thanks so much.
Whitney
cc57241 said,
February 26, 2008 at 11:18 pm
Thank you for your comments on my poetry project! I always appreciate your encouraging words! I’m glad you enjoyed it. See you Wed.